kaika...

The idea is nice. The delicate cherry blossoms give the image a certain warmth.
Drapery, and the leg muscles you've brought over anatomically and, of course. As for the weapon, it looks pretty two-dimensional. The index finger on his right hand is not visible almost. It would have a little spot to be seen.
Pattern of the belt is immediately appreciable. Just like I look like the sandals with extra band well.
Currently I find that I tend to write with you always like this.
/ promise improvement / .______.

mfg Seneya